加拿大商科研究生GMAT寫作精選范文干貨分享
GMAT作文的備考,考生能做的比較有限,除了練好基本寫作功夫外,也只有背模板是比較靠譜的方法。GMAT備考
Winter's gone,we are studying the Analytical Writing Assessment(AWA)task of the GMAT.Questions used are all from the Pool of Sample Topics available in the Official Guide.Be prepared for that some of the questions will look familiar when you actually take the test.
Now,we will be reading the question:
「Question No.88」
The following appeared in an ad for a book titled How to Write a Screenplay for a Movie:
“Writers who want to succeed should try to write film screenplays rather than books,since the average film tends to make greater profits than does even a best-selling book.It is true that some books are also made into films.However,our nation’s film producers are more likely to produce movies based on original screenplays than to produce films based on books,because in recent years the films that have sold the most tickets have usually been based on original screenplays.”
以三個邏輯疑點為例,示范關(guān)于邏輯疑點的討論/寫作
First,the comparison between a book and a screenplay makes no sense,←首先,直接指出疑點的核心。然后,具體分析我質(zhì)疑的原因→because of the argument’s lack of information regarding how the royalty of a best-selling book is calculated and regarding how that of a screenplay is calculated.A writer of a screenplay may be paid a tiny portion of the profits the film generates,and the tiny portion may be less than the generous royalty a writer may be paid from the sales of a best-selling book,although the book is less profitable than the film.【常見邏輯疑點:偷換概念?!?/p>
Second,it is likely that a writer who writes books gets paid both from the publication of their books and the production of films based on their books,while a writer of screenplays only benefits from one source of income,which is the screenplays alone.Since the double-income may be greater than the single-income,writing books may be more financially beneficial.【常見邏輯疑點:多個變量問題?!?/p>
小總結(jié):寫作中的兩種常用句型三,
是“可能性”句型(關(guān)鍵詞被黃色高亮標(biāo)出)
Lastly,since success includes a wide range of achievements,including financial gains,winning awards,intellectual or artistic influence,and sociocultural status,writers who want to succeed in terms of fame may not write screenplays,which may bring good economic rewards but may bring little fame.【常見邏輯疑點:范疇問題】
加拿大商科研究生GMAT寫作精選范文干貨分享
其它邏輯疑點提示:
【常見邏輯疑點:偷換概念?!?/p>
【常見邏輯疑點:時間問題:提示詞:in recent years】
【常見邏輯疑點:地點問題:提示詞:our nations’】
gmat考試作文部分歷來是考生比較關(guān)注的地方,能在gmat作文里拿到不錯的成績,說出去也是非常有面子的。其實寫作文就是一個聯(lián)想的過程,就是大家發(fā)揮自己的想象力把自己想說的說出來就可以了。
例如,William Harvey(1578-1657))哈維,血液循環(huán)發(fā)現(xiàn)人,推翻了蓋倫的理論(對于這個例子,我們既可以用在質(zhì)疑精神推動了科學(xué)的進(jìn)步,又能用在那些“偉大的思想家,科學(xué)家往往不受他們所在的時代和社會的認(rèn)可”以及“現(xiàn)在的很多成就都受過去的成就的影響”,因此這樣一個例子就能眷顧到很多話題的支持中,這樣也就提高了我們的備考效率,因為提高了我們所掌握的素材的性價比,要多掌握那些很有針對性同時還不乏靈活性的例子,我們所掌握的素材就能發(fā)揮更高的效率)
William Harvey(1578-1657),English physician,who discovered the circulation of the blood and the role of the heart in propelling it,thus refuting the theories of Galen(注:質(zhì)疑精神的題目用到的有效論據(jù))and laying the foundation for modern physiology(注:過去對現(xiàn)在的影響的有效論據(jù)).
Harvey‘s De Motu Cordis subjected him to severe criticism by some contemporaries(注:偉大的科學(xué)家總不受當(dāng)時的社會認(rèn)可,思想超前),but this was more than compensated for by the later widespread recognition of his contribution.
所示的一個哈維的例子,就短短一小段話,但是這個小段落中的三個不同的地方,其實應(yīng)對了Issue里最重要的三個主題(“質(zhì)疑精神”,“參考過去,參考?xì)v史,過去對現(xiàn)在的影響”,“偉人思想超前他們所在的時代”)的寫作的例子,而這三個主題加起來輻射了我們gmat Issue話題題庫中的將近49個題目,這種素材的性價比就太高了,是個很典型的gmat寫作的聯(lián)想的例子。GMAT作文
GMAT考試作文聯(lián)想法要注意的是方法雖然好用,但是gmat作文基礎(chǔ)一定要扎實。所以不能為了掌握gmat寫作技巧而忘記打牢基礎(chǔ),哪個更重要同學(xué)們一定要心理有數(shù)。
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